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ART: :thumb341294173: [link] by :iconnattie-bug:

Part one: 6,500+ words
Story: mine
Characters: not mine

Il Piccolo Panificio The Little Bakery.
Siete ancora molto caldo You are still very hot.
Mio figlio My son.

Part 2: [link] Part 3: [link]
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Okay, you know about my ridiculous, off the wall feels for historical AU fics, so I won't elaborate too much on that. I hate how few historical fics there really are, and so it's always nice to see contributions to that genre of Frerard c:

I think you pulled this off wonderfully. From the way they speak to the sexy (Victorian?) clothing, the details were immaculate and there were only a few times where the speaking became a little too 21st century for my liking.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE where this is going. Victorian (is it Victorian? I'm assuming it is) vampires and esquires and Italian bakeries and sheesh I can practically taste the feels which are surely coming. I have a great feeling about this <3

Nicely done, as always. I look forward to more soon!